The-String-Man's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rofl Monster - Dignity]

There's a lot of timing issues from the beginning. I feel like if it should be faster too. The whole time I feel like I was waiting for the part that's just gonna kick ass. But it never came!!!! It's overall pretty good though. Try pushing yourself a little more with some more interesting rhythms. The straight eigth notes get boring.

[-Summ3rtime-]

Haha so sick!!

The only comment I can make is you gotta move that bass around more! Everything else was kick ass!

[{BT} Evil Always Wins]

I wouldn't say victory for evildoers...

It's still good though! When I hear this I think of an evil level in a game like banjo-kazooie or mario.

BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for your thoughts. :)

[Space People]

yeah

Three Years To Takeoff is broken up. Joey?

The verses are pretty good, but the chorus is not catchy enough.

[Liar (What's Wrong With You)]

why do people like this?

The singers off key a lot and the instruments are boring. The chords are the same ones used over and over again in punk music. You're trying too hard to sound like The Ramones or Green Day, make something more original. Maybe add some lead guitar parts and bass lines that go off the root. Punk music has evolved past stuff like this and there's a reason for it.

It's just not a very impressive song. You guys have potential though so keep trying.

[Pure of Heart]

I really like this.

It reminds me a lot of like - A hard working farm boy realizes his potential and has saved the world, then there's the scenes where he revisits everyone he meant along the way and goes back home. In that scene, this song should be playing. It's perfect for it.

Bosa responds:

That is a good scene indeed. Thank you for sharing your own insight on this song, and please feel free to continue listening to and reviewing music on Newgrounds! Thank you!

[Random Solo Blues thing]

You're good at guitar but...

This is mostly just guitar solo techniques, like sweeps. Try adding in some melody to your playing, it'd be more enjoyable to listen to. Anyone who knows scales can solo for 4 minutes. There's no better way to say it but there's very little feeling put into this piece. The backing track was just a 12 bar blues and the solo was boring.

Even better yet, try to make an actual song. Like with a verse. chorus, ect.